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consider the following (Free verse) by crwncka1
a man that sees everything, is a man who knows nothing, a man that knows everything, is a man that sees nothing, a man who thinks with his head, is a man without a heart, a man with a heart, is a man without a head, a man who knows love, is a man full of hate, a man full of hate, is a man without love, a man with no life, is a man full of burden, a man full of burden, is a man with a life, a man who has nothing, is a man of everything, a man who has everything, is a man of nothing, a man who knows failure, is a man lives for success, a man who is a success, is a man who knows failure, a man full of lies, is a man of truth, a man of truth, is a man full of lies

Up the ladder: pick the scabs
Down the ladder: Death

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9579
Posted: September 26, 2003 6:37 AM PDT; Last modified: September 26, 2003 6:37 AM PDT
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[4] FreeFormFixation @ 216.125.247.11 | 26-Sep-03/11:26 AM | Reply
i wont even begin an equal rights type of comment...
[8] click64 @ 81.178.103.94 | 4-Feb-06/4:13 PM | Reply
A man can write a poem beautifully.
As shown by you.
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