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pick the scabs (Free verse) by NNirvana13666
I slit my tongue on an envelope
I bled on white paper
My blood drew a picture
I defined it
The shapes it made were senseless
But blood alone sets my mind at ease
I sat for hours watching my tongue bleed
Faces and words came before me
Drugless my mind was running on imagination
The scent of blood is wicked
The feel of blood is electrifying
Keep on picking the scabs so the wound never heals
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.910598
Overall Rank: 9578
Posted: September 23, 2003 11:21 AM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2003 11:21 AM PDT
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