Re: The Seasons, Changes by Frass	29-Aug-02/7:40 PM
if the avon lady stays any longer...we'll go broke..
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:59 PM
Malthusian.8/10!
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:28 PM
Malthusian.8/10!
Re: remember me by Katie	28-Aug-02/5:21 PM
dig the typos purpose, and false child banter! you pass! at what? deviled egging.19/10
Re: Uncertainty by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:19 PM
god damn this things a fucking poltergeist...be gone foul djin i banish thee!!!!!!!!
Re: Esplanade by Wulf	28-Aug-02/5:18 PM
this get the Bachus 'WHO STOLE MY ROCKET POWERED TOOTH BRUSH AWARD' enjoy. 10/10
Re: "nos-f***ing-talgia": a crappy unrhymed sonnet by chicken	28-Aug-02/5:16 PM
indeed.groovy title and nice soup! 10
Re: KAT 2 by nentwined	28-Aug-02/5:11 PM
mammon/ noun: material wealth having a debasing influence. 6/10
Re: The boy who shot birds by Bachus	27-Aug-02/6:10 PM
Why? so the illiterate can stare at it and pick their asses and go...gee, "but it's so long and complicated". no thanks. i would much rather read the spittle of under sexed well read house wifes with divinity complexes...going like...wow! here child is your poetry lesson for the day...just for you...from a cultured bossom, lol!. the bottom line is..some are born to write, and others born to pretend..like dark angel for example, now he's one of these talented types with a hundred ways of expressing the creative medium, if not thousands, but you. what? always...feminine power pumping estrogen reeking girl to woman romps that stink of infatuating with what you can never be, 'as powerfull as daddy' bicep flex in the summer sun. now dark angel, he's talented and diverse, and goes to hip trendy hipper stiller trendier clubs like coven 13, and stigmata w/the likes of kino...and hallucinets...bravo god's wife, and you too da, you both fail, and i'll see you on judgement day when the great hoof in the sky decides it's time your beaks were squared....loose minded critics are a dime a dozen whether talking about father's balls and the need for balls of their own, or gay poo body rubbing, or mother, or gods, or whatever, but me and mine are onto the collaging of the past and the future of writing through more symbolically reranged sources, sorry you didn't get tapped for the 'think tank of tesla grovelers" like me.maybe next time. in a world that respects the real power of big cock propaganda, and doesn't dwell on trite things like, poo and daddy and mommies. you might get your big break!...you all make me eat boogers and fart on the dog. i hate you. all of you.....bastards...interlopers.
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	27-Aug-02/12:53 AM
that's right. love the jibber jabber 9/10!
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	27-Aug-02/12:51 AM
that's right. love the jibber jabber 9/10!
Re: Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles	27-Aug-02/12:48 AM
yeah! bitch! "up your mouth"!???
Re: Yesterday I cried by 1Sapphire1	26-Aug-02/3:52 PM
Now god's wife, ye know us bachians can fell that tree with one whack.what's this about editing, nay! only typos never structure! who? us? chew on your ankle, this piece suffers from tacky adjective syndrome, and unfunctionable noun disease, i say unfortunately, it is beyond medical-literal-visual recovery, and should be put down 4/10!
Re: Work by poetandknowit	26-Aug-02/3:29 PM
that's fucking blue collar brilliance p&k, you get the Bacchian swagger of the week recipe here comes the love baby (Bachus's favorite soup) Kotosoupa Avgolemono: (Greek traditional Chicken and rice soup) What you need: 1 stewing chicken, 6 c.broth, 1 c. rice, 3 eggs, seperated, juice of one lemon(my favorite aspect, <stoner short cut add lemon juice to campel's chicken noodle w/rice>), salt & pepper to taste. Boil chicken until cooked. remove chicken and let cool. boil 6 cups of broth and add one cup of rice. add salt & p to taste. When rice is cooked, lower heat to simmer. put 3 egg whites in mixing bowl and beat until stiff. then add the yolks, then add juice of one lemon slowly; beating well. then add the yolks, then add juice of one lemon slowly; beating well. then add the broth, a littla at a time, beating well, until most of the broth is used. Pour this mixture back into pot, stirring well. Pieces of chicken may now be added to soup if desired. "That all-softening overpowering knell, the tocsin of the soul-the dinner bell." Lord Byron (enjoy the recipe friend, and the poem was great and bountiful, like this soup! 9/10! t
Re: Mobile home agenda by Bachus	25-Aug-02/8:49 PM
also a hello to you fine lady..hope your well, and obeying your curfew...remember boys are bad by nature and bred liars, but so are girls...i must shower..i smell like a kelp bed that was picked up and hurled by a twenty foot shore breaker! fizzled...and to top it off i have to cut my hair for some prawne play DAMNIT I hate musicals...
Re: Blind by shwenatjadeflower	24-Aug-02/10:33 PM
Clive Barker just bungie jumped out of the ghost structure of the shattered light house in Alexandria with a piano string tied to his mushroom prince...the judge from kenya gave his dive a 6.667895 for missing the water... i cryed for the loss of a great visionest...
Re: Buried at Sea by brazen	24-Aug-02/10:23 PM
check lines 4,7, to fix typos "heal", should be "heel" and "saftetly" should be well you know...just looking out for you bros..editor's advice is golden...
Re: One by ben	24-Aug-02/12:33 PM
ben you are evil and full of the devil...i curse you...and have sent a swarm of locusts to carry away and eat your mother's cooking...you went on a reading spree back there friend....ye made some comments that surely were false and misleading...i demand satassfiction...everything you voted well for clearly wasn't and vice versa....you my good man are a burden to your first name...i demand that you re-name yourself, "fifi", this instant...thank you..your peg leg "bachus"! <brought to you by 'go-fast' the better way to go, and 'fermunda weeze' cancer of the lung mixed with just the right amount of bubonic plague> 1/10
Re: Three Daughters by <~>	24-Aug-02/12:18 PM
excellent ending z..really got me verklemt...love the noah-mediterranian mythos-british isle-mythos======your mad loom..spin on with your tangled skein...tom petty tonight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yes! 8/10v
Re: Black Buns by Bachus	24-Aug-02/12:07 PM
i demand you lemmings vote 0's when voting on this piece please, lest i run my gay blade thee lengths of your spoiled ethnic chasms! DAMNIT man, i am on a mission here to get to to the top five on the worst list fuckers, and you bastards giving me tens for this 'clearly racist smut' simply is not helping....oh..if you guys need prompting...here goes...i think all of your writings are childrens crayola-d wall scribbles, and black children with speech impediments at that, and of course all of the children have aids and ass warts...not to mention sickle cell anema....there...better, good...when thinking bachus think 0's...thank you for your support, aND MAY YOU ALL CONTRACT JAUNDICE AND MONO! bastards..undeserving prats..the nerve i swear..huh..some people..geez.o