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Buried at Sea (Free verse) by brazen
Broken waves, Shattered by steel, Stolen echoes, Scattered at its heal, Rocking gently, In my Mother's arms, Saftely nestled, On a burden of harms. I find joy fleating, Beneath a sea of rocks, I lose myself unwilling, Behind a door with no locks, I see no misfits caring, Believing all ships are in their docks.

Up the ladder: Transfiguration
Down the ladder: Hope

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7633
Posted: August 24, 2002 8:20 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2002 8:20 PM PDT
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[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 24-Aug-02/10:23 PM | Reply
check lines 4,7, to fix typos "heal", should be "heel" and "saftetly" should be well you know...just looking out for you bros..editor's advice is golden...
[n/a] brazen @ | 26-Aug-02/5:32 AM | Reply
yes, and thank you...i must remember to stop writing while trying to download porn. its too hard to focus.
[7] alexander @ 213.122.182.183 | 26-Aug-02/5:46 AM | Reply
porn again poet eh !
[5] blindwriter @ 219.47.92.54 | 3-Apr-05/11:08 PM | Reply
*heel
*fleeting
Wandering...choppy...
But concise and full of yummy imagery.
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