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Free verse № 11132

One

by ben

Member since 2002 · Posted 24 Aug 2002 · 6 comments

When I came here I was one With no one to phone Or call me home I hate to moan Its so alone When you are one

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7 votes so far. Yours would make 8.7 votes so far

6 comments

[10] god'swife 24-Aug-02/9:59 AM Reply
Your poetry is like a babbling brook of insightful wisdom. 10
[10] god'swife 24-Aug-02/9:59 AM Reply
Your poetry is like a babbling brook of insightful wisdom. 10
[1] Bachus 24-Aug-02/12:33 PM Reply
ben you are evil and full of the devil...i curse you...and have sent a swarm of locusts to carry away and eat your mother's cooking...you went on a reading spree back there friend....ye made some comments that surely were false and misleading...i demand satassfiction...everything you voted well for clearly wasn't and vice versa....you my good man are a burden to your first name...i demand that you re-name yourself, "fifi", this instant...thank you..your peg leg "bachus"! <brought to you by 'go-fast' the better way to go, and 'fermunda weeze' cancer of the lung mixed with just the right amount of bubonic plague> 1/10
[n/a] alexander 25-Aug-02/4:27 AM Reply
bacchus-thank you for your good wishes, they are much appreciated in this world of cynicism and easy virtue. God's wife, you have clear vision and if god ever gets tired of you, I will be here for you. I like your poetry too-Anne Sexton would be proud of you-my all time favourite.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> 25-Aug-02/7:06 AM Reply
twas nothing beast!
[7] Tarquin De La Bog 29-Aug-02/5:18 AM Reply
It's a tad too depressing for my tastes, but you manage to convey the sense of loneliness without resorting to the any of the cliched stereotypes like 'darkness', etc, and so for that I gives you a 7. I look forward to more.