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Three Daughters (Ode) by <~>
Three Sisters stand at the Center of the Seas
Deaf to the Wind, unmoved by the Breeze
Bloodless Arms stretched out behind
Long strong Fingers intertwined
Rock beneath them saved from sinking
By strong Desire, a Trick of Thinking
Taught long ago by a Father, dear
Who sailed away, untouched by Care
To seek a Dowry both fine and fair
Which he would gift to the worthy Men
His beloved Daughters chose to wed
No Lover lures them, nor Sailor sways,
No charmant Suitor will persuade
Nor Ever lead these Maids astray
They wait, they watch, they look for Signs,
Other Pleasures out of Mind
As ever-longer Days contrive
To test their Fealty. Hearts alive
And coursing strong,
They strain for Strands of his oft-heard Song
"My Daughters three
When will it be
That I at last
Come Home to thee"
The Morn he left, the Autumn'd come
The Cold was nigh, Summer'd spun
Her Gold all out. But Tide was fair
Though crisp, the Air
Three Gifts he sought, to please his Dears
He smiled as he felt the Wind abate
Prepared to sail to meet his Fate
And took their Oath that they would wait
For his Return, before they made
Their spousal Vows.
Possess'd of Will as knurled as Oak
They have unfurled a steely Cloak
That wears as Iron
Only his Voice, his Face, his Name
Will free them from this filial Chain
Only his Return to them
Shall loose them, set them free again
A Father's Oath, "I will return"
Has kept them so, their Faces turned
To Depths of Sea when Night cries Loud
And dark Caresses do enshroud
The Forms of Mind, Heart, Soul;
Three faithful, watching, hoping, hold
To each other, wait for his Word:
He promised them a Sign by Bird
To tell of his Return
On this, their hundredth Night of Silence
The eldest Sister dreams: cold Islands,
And there, a Ship, she's sinking fast
Their Father in the icy Grasp
Of Northern Seas
She shuddered as the Surface froze
The slowing Ocean drew him close
As many Widows had been made
In Northern Seas
One final Omen did she see
Before the Scry was lost at Sea:
A Blackbird rose above the Frost;
It called three times, to count the Cost
O'er Northern Seas
The other Sisters then awoke
The Eldest swooned; their Watch was broke
Their Necks they bent
Their Hearts were rent
In heavy Sorrow
Heaven, split 'twixt Night and Day
Wavered, as if held in Sway
The Moon was high,
The Sun was nigh,
And so woke the Morrow:
A Blackbird rose above the Dawn
They knew at once that he was gone
"Father!" keened the First;
The Crow circled 'round.
"Father!" cried the Second;
The Bird continued down.
"Father!" wept the Third;
It dropt a Sprig of Pine.
The Daughters bent to catch the branch,
But lost it to the Brine
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.95
Weighted score: 5.9049454
Overall Rank: 1456
Posted: August 23, 2002 11:09 PM PDT; Last modified: August 24, 2002 1:07 AM PDT
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