Re: Autophage by Cha no Onna	31-Aug-02/4:42 PM
trahison des clercs!
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	31-Aug-02/4:22 PM
1) i have seen you many times appologize, not for your poetry, but for forgeting a line out of it while you were orating,(melrose coffee house last year, whittier coffe house 4 or five years ago) and i'm just saying...fuck the line, nobody knows but you, replace it with a random connecting thought.improv, act, retract...nobody want's to hear anyone read something from a paper or from the inside of their minds...here's a thought ..relive it each time anew...it stays fresher, 2)and what kind of advice to you suggest i give to some of these kids...huh..your creative writing lesson of the week?...i fucking help the ones that i can, in a more creatively inspiring manner, by making them think in outside terms? this is not a poetry workshop for fucking teaching cads and cretans it's poemranker...there is no need to sit and explain to them all , "hi, i'm god's wife i think you should listen to more t-rex and read blah blah dickinmouth ble. here capitalize this, erase that, stasnza blee.....cuz i'm god's wife which makes it what. worthy? wow you're right sorry, after all your god's wife...... okay here ye here ye the wife of id will be selecting a group of twits for a good grinding all aboard!...some shit just isn't that easy...you either got it, or you don't. you do, and so does babbit,and dark angel isn't at all a serious writer?, and neither is bachus? or whitman? or shaskowski? cuz they're just playing? fuck that this is a forum, fight or sit in the stands, but teach in another corner that's your job not mine. i say push until pulled!
Re: Time by mozac	31-Aug-02/4:02 PM
it needs more...time?
Re: Time by mozac	31-Aug-02/4:02 PM
it needs more...time?
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	31-Aug-02/1:54 PM
he happens to be breaking through the normal stances of writing and conveying certain thoughts..how about you? stick to your 'reading' of poetry open mic to a crowd of ten.. poetry that you have to memorize for dayd ahead of time if it's new the others you know by heart, but you NEVER CHANGE ANYTHING..it's the same old show, over and over and god forbid if you forget a line on stage cuz then we have to hear you appologize and try to go through the whole piece again, FUCK! why? because you can't improvise (it's so much sexier and creatively inspiring to fly by the seat of your pants)you never could and you never will, you need to go 'read' poetry with babbit in the woods, and keep teaching the young ones here the beauty of the ruby warbler, and let your little bros handle the improv madness..."one eyed croissant butterer/" a penis...duh..nevermind...you are getting slow in your old age...this is clearly four seperate pieces that work off of eachother in a very accessable manner...i..unlike you, have developed a 'new way' to edit, write, and mix my old with my new and collage it with anything i can grab, media, commercials whatever...what do you do, ah yes the same old same old....boring...way to push the envelope..here you preach about the spoken and written word as if you truly grasp the meaning behind god speaking life into us, yet you fail to deliver anything other than lusty little girl daddy praising drivel with a ufo inbetween...wow the majestic twelve..project blue bird, red cell, it's all the same.. and the truth is none of us here will or can do anything about it but go wow, she's cool..she knows...what? could you go up in front of an audience and speak proficiently about the topic in a three part series wrapping it up with a standing o at the end without memorizing your speach? no, some have to prepar...others are always prepared..lighten up to open up..their is no formula to great writing only the need to write, you once told me that...now what. you sand bag..whatever! and of course it's iconoclastic masturbation, that's the fucking title for christ's sake...the whole thing is about, religious symbolism and sex and love and the rituals involved with them...b-days, weddings...sunday school..etc...i'm realy worried about you! what have you been reading civil war poetry again in your bath tub...cuz wow your poetry these days are so risky..geez...red shoes flyingblah blah red birds dying blee blee...hidden agendas we have no connection to other then the grand fascade blah blah he fucks her blee blee where daddy go bla...i mean who in the fuck are you trying to impress yourself? here you praise the works of writers like rimbaud, joyce and so on.sexton they all developed a language and style that was their own...what have you developed, ah yes another red bird poem...babbits waiting in the woods,have fun...i'm off to discover new territories in writing, new layers to purge...see you under the spruce with babbit...i'll be the man on the moon....<brought to you by crowley's "the book of the law", have you got your nut today, and photo hack the quickest way to develop your memorys> lol!have fun with your originality.
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	31-Aug-02/12:49 PM
Horus had me write a tribute to it called "Award show? make my cock hard." it pretty much sums it up. trust me spare your mind...i know it's fun to watch the integrity of our great culture being trampolined into oblivion, but fuck! it left me with a rash and having to sleep with a loaded gun....go to my latest selection..it pretty much hits the entire show in the nuts...oh and horus said thanks for the blood break down, now he's got another reason to go to colorado instead of snow boarding..the tastiest soup and wrestling Atalanta! b luv h luv v.
Re: you're never alone by nentwined	30-Aug-02/8:00 PM
fatti maschii parole femine!
Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8	30-Aug-02/7:57 PM
how sayeth the brethren? guilty.
Re: Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus	30-Aug-02/11:37 AM
my momma said poetry is like a box of chocalates...you never know when a metal smith will stand to comprehend the shape of it all.......it is a heart felt stab at those fuckers shoving down our throats...fuck them i say...serve it back to them rocket powered dildoed<to vulcan.......to z>...hey z....i gotta go to an audition right now talk to you later...thanks for your words, and love...see you later...sweetness! neatness. folding for flavorless love...hold onto the tail and whip it........h_^
Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit	29-Aug-02/11:00 PM
so there's fifty altogether. cool, or huh sorry....fuck it....change #50 last line to / the phone stopped ringing/ or/ marajuana urge?u
Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/10:48 PM
venus don't be nieve! this is the dark one dressed in head gear...trust me...D.A! DAMNIT get out of the tart immediately...i rebuke you!!!!!o
Re: Prologue-Epilogue: A Self-Indulgent Peice of Tripe by Shin-Bojangles	29-Aug-02/10:45 PM
nice.thmmppppp.
Re: Uncertainty by nentwined	29-Aug-02/10:44 PM
has somebody not been getting enough attention lately? okay! somebody hug nentwined so we can go about our business cuz i'm getting fucking bombarded over here...i can only pray mine are doing that to him...fuck! check out me knew haiku series to mtv its riveting and full of bavarian creme!FUCK YEAH REVOLUTIONNNN REVOLT AGAINST THE MAN, THE BLACKS THE WHITES, THE SPICS.THE WOPS,THE POOS, THE JEWS, THE REDNECKS THE DIKES ha...everyone against everyone yes i hate myself most of al;l yeahhhhhhhhhhhh,,,fuck michael j, and limp peanuts and all of them ahhhhhhhhhhhhh. the vines are cool though. was he mad....he sucked.....what wever wappened to fuuckingMUSSSSIIIIIICCCCCC. fuck. fuck yu too. fuckers
Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/9:59 PM
LOOK OUT fuck...timber...she's a leaner...run...RUUUUUUUUNNNNNN!!!!!! four!
Re: Incidentally, you might want to look up 'Amplexus' by Shin-Bojangles	29-Aug-02/9:57 PM
i give you full credit for the theme....i especially love all of your diverse and well rounded characters especially......keep up the go/od work. that ring things pretty hip too. quite moving. indeed.i
Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/9:11 PM
god! this is to good to be true...you are priceless...d.a DAMNIT! quit fucking around dude...you're realy starting to worry me...pull your evil spirit out of this retarded girl. PLEASE!. for the love of jesu' just fucking stop it please...god..plea......make him stop doing that.f
Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/9:03 PM
another fine example of why michael jackson looks the way he does and touches little boys on their penises. their nice soft penises, remind me of a flying leaf that lands right 'pon my lap...i guess that 69 in your name makes you an expert on leaf navagations and love huh.....better leaf the poetry to those who write and dont BLOW! you blow....lol! and deep down inside too.....you fail..misserably. good luck.. have fun here...stay as long as you want, and write more.....please..i need the extra targets.i
Re: Summer Son by Frass	29-Aug-02/8:15 PM
i just can't win this...you're to nice...fuck it...i give in to the lap dance...let theballs roll as the will. i give
Re: 22nd Anniversary by Frass	29-Aug-02/8:01 PM
this smells like another father of the bride sequal...this time...in.. norfolk..so positive and uplifting...awe...and it makes you think too...alot...lots of braincells are up there right now...in my huge mind just...wow..smelling flowers, and solutions..and i don't even remember what i was mad about...oh yes...here it comes...the joyful glee...la.la.la.laaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.LAaaaaa la. lo.la.lo. sing with me...follow the bouncing flower sniffer. you'll feel better trust me...smile children cuz things are just so perfect and special these days...yeah..i feel it alright...lots of spears shaking around here. i'm joylouse.
Re: Billie's Threnody by Frass	29-Aug-02/7:51 PM
here frass shows us once again his amazing ability to hone it down...to...yes..yes...to sculpt..i'm awed...