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"nos-f***ing-talgia": a crappy unrhymed sonnet (Free verse) by chicken
on a bench of somewhere in the forgotten past the wind whispered lightly and a brown, crisp dead leaf danced and scraped its hunched corpse across an expanse of cold gray cement and the trees brushed against each other like familiar lifelong friends who are glad to be familiar lifelong friends and the day was getting ready to give way to night as the sun ducked below the clouds my world was well again, because i saw her beauty illuminated in a heavenly golden hue

Up the ladder: pain: siamese verse 2
Down the ladder: Sanity

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.142857
Weighted score: 4.769479
Overall Rank: 11385
Posted: July 31, 2002 8:05 PM PDT; Last modified: July 31, 2002 8:05 PM PDT
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[5] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 31-Jul-02/11:51 PM | Reply
At least we know that you get off quick.. that's refreshing
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 28-Aug-02/5:16 PM | Reply
indeed.groovy title and nice soup! 10
[4] Princess_Snowflake @ 209.7.23.202 | 17-Dec-03/8:29 PM | Reply
Very poetic!
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