| Re: Paean by Terence |
17-Jul-03/9:41 AM |
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Fortune cookie poetry is better not removed from the cookie and consumed. When your spirit soars, do you steer it like a kite? When you praise the lord, do you give god the glory, glory? I believe the world is your scallop and she is a barnacle.
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| Re: a comment on Las Gaviotas by Bachus |
16-Jul-03/3:56 PM |
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| Re: Optimism, pessimism and my quarter theory by INTRANSIT |
15-Jul-03/5:13 PM |
Don't do it man! LOL.
I loved the first three quarters of it.
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| Re: Igor's inspiration by zzinnia66 |
15-Jul-03/5:09 PM |
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| Re: Acoustic by zzinnia66 |
15-Jul-03/5:07 PM |
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| Re: Broken by OnTheOtherHand |
11-Jul-03/2:43 PM |
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| Re: How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand |
11-Jul-03/2:41 PM |
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Please get out of my window display. If you think I'm too fucking gay. lol
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| Re: a comment on Nigger Hole by horus8 |
10-Jul-03/7:15 PM |
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Ah, I probably wouldn't use this on my poetic resume per say, but it's good propaganda. Yeah, I know the feelin'. Anyhow, whenever you feel like talking or want me to help you edit a piece... just let me know, it doesn't have to be Satanic, I was just practicing swinging around my new tail is all.
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| Re: a comment on Walk in a dream (an ode to self help poems) by Bachus |
9-Jul-03/4:26 PM |
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| Re: love sick by rymemaster |
8-Jul-03/1:04 PM |
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"Now your left alone" you are or you're. If you're going to attempt being wicked and aloof? Please do it correctly, otherwise you give us poets of darkness a bad name.
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| Re: Everyone thinks I'm Settle by King Abdullah II |
8-Jul-03/1:01 PM |
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| Re: the godself within by crwncka1 |
7-Jul-03/2:40 PM |
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You are trying to hard, you need to let go, because this poetry of yours today is just shit mate, turn around and do it again, I'm serious. It's not poetry, it sounds like the diluted message of a dyslexic cult leader huffing on low grade gasoline.
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| Re: blackhole by crwncka1 |
7-Jul-03/2:26 PM |
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Sounds likes a case of food poisoning to me. Every poem you wrote today was an utter waste of time. Try again.
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| Re: a comment on blackhole by crwncka1 |
7-Jul-03/2:25 PM |
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Oh, yeah, that should guide her home. lol.
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| Re: the power that be by crwncka1 |
7-Jul-03/2:20 PM |
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That's not the universe ticking gumshoe that's the sound of poets everywhere eating their time pieces, so as to forget when they read this.
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| Re: a comment on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus |
6-Jul-03/2:47 PM |
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| Re: a comment on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus |
6-Jul-03/2:46 PM |
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The squirrel died my friend, the dog was on it's carcass chewing. Revenge for hours of torment. Read between the lines. The dog can't be on something if it's dead, now can it?
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| Re: a comment on Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz |
6-Jul-03/12:47 PM |
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The irony, obviously. We are the locusts capable of moving from planet to planet doing just what it is we supposedly are resisting. That and timing, because it's unquotable hollywood crap being used by a poet to repoint the finger, I believe, makes the piece entirely different from the way you're viewing it. It made me laugh at every line.
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| Re: Independence Day (the speech from the film) by scitz |
6-Jul-03/12:43 PM |
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I sense some internal personalization occuring. lol.
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| Re: Rude Awakenings by OneFingerAnswer |
5-Jul-03/11:19 PM |
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