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love sick (Free verse) by rymemaster
Through your mansion of fear
down your hallway of pain
you're living the life
of the sick and insane.
I don't want to be another
useless memory holding you tight
or another ghost that passes through
and vanishes into the night.
I'd rather feel the hurt inside
then know the emptiness
your heart must hide.
But you travel by night
and hide in fear
sealing your heart
to all that is near.
Now your left alone
with the cold walls you embrace
leaving you with your weak lies
in your dark and lonely place.
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Posted: July 8, 2003 1:09 AM PDT; Last modified: July 8, 2003 1:09 AM PDT
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you told me your feeling/but you aint givin/ no reason for believin
(that is to say more insight needed)