Re: All is Just a Crush by confuzdlilgirl	14-Aug-03/9:23 PM
L2 has nine beats instead of 10.
Re: Padre's Gumbo by SupremeDreamer	14-Aug-03/8:50 PM
Weird, if you ask me.
Re: Cycling to the Library by Nicholas Jones	14-Aug-03/8:33 PM
Have you seen that movie the Goonies? 10!
Re: a comment on The Neckbrace of Evil by Bachus	14-Aug-03/8:31 PM
No, no, no and nope, but you were very very close.
Re: Day Of Reckoning by Kitch	13-Aug-03/1:39 PM
It's good for you.
Re: The Well by Caducus	13-Aug-03/1:16 PM
The well is dry. Yet, buckets keep coming. Falling into that blackhole. Wishes & drowning shimmering coins. Aged leaders weighing me down. Distant circles of light. But miry walls keep me trapped. There was a ladder. But I've long since hit bottom." Thank you, I did an edit for you too. feel free to pick and choose from any components i've modifeid or introduced. I am very flattered as always, and am your friend.
Re: -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker	10-Aug-03/2:10 AM
I will have you know I invented the wicky chicky wah, and deserve to be "". Thank you and good riddance.
Re: Angel by mistaric	7-Aug-03/8:36 AM
Bagel (Lyric) by Mr. Rick Here I stand, on the edge of a brand new day The sun is shining, brightly leading the payed I breathe in the exhaust, and the air all around me From out of nowhere you finally found me, and we blow dryed together You’re an Bagel, Sent from the promise land You’re an bagel, Made by a Jew's rich hand You’re an bagel, How can it be, That the way I feel about you Is how you feel about me I hear the oven incinerating yeast I smell the scent of your egg, onion, and garlic breaking as the breeze The sound of your roundness calling from the ovens of yor The way my life’s changed, it’s like you waved a magic smore You’re an Bagel, Sent from up above You’re an Bagel, You’re so hot I need a glove You’re an Bagel, How can I remove, The way I feel about you now Is pure like a white dove You pick me up, I feel on top of Jerusalem I want to shout from the top of the wailing wall, that you’re my sweetest bagel halved and toasted Loxed and boasted More precious to me than diamonds and pearls in Antwerp And as the sun sets, and nite starts to call The stars are shining, and I take you to the mall Your hole reflecting, under a child's balloon You should be my wife, with cream cheese on a spoon You’re an bagel, Sent from up above You’re an bagel, So hot I need a glove You’re an bagel, How can this be, That the way I feel about you now Is only because I like to eat And as I close my ovens, and fall gently into sleep Each nite I pray to Jesu, that like me you're deep And I thank Jews, for putting you in my mouth All my dreams have come true, Like a rebel flag down south You’re an Bagel, Sent from up above You’re an Bagel, You’re the one I love You’re an Bagel, How can it really be, That just one day without you could rewrite some Jews history.
Re: blue lilac and I (edit) by richa	7-Aug-03/8:13 AM
Real real good.
Re: a comment on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8	7-Aug-03/7:43 AM
No worrys, I made it all up anyway. My father was in prison most of my life and my Mother passed on while bringing me into this world, and simultaneously reading Voltaire's Candid.
Re: How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8	7-Aug-03/7:40 AM
Did we? At your house? I've never been good with sex really. Probably, the prostitution thing, all that guilt short circuiting my chakras.
Re: a comment on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8	7-Aug-03/6:24 AM
Thanks mate, this past year has been pure poetry, and you've been right there with me. One day we'll smoke our pipes and recollect, the best years.
Re: a comment on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8	7-Aug-03/6:21 AM
When I start living, I'm taking you on the town with me like Frank and Dino at the Sands.
Re: a comment on Inet. mag. editors R jealous red haired Jews, oh and I'm 29 by horus8	7-Aug-03/6:20 AM
Thank you, very kind words, although I'm old and ugly. Well, older, anyway.
Re: a comment on LIVE FROM CHEYENNE,WY. "The Forgeters!" by horus8	6-Aug-03/3:31 PM
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42592 http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=37764 http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=30172 http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=30168 Thanks for the tip, but I'm aware of more than just one style of writing haikus, vilanelles, sestinas, lyrics, odes and limericks, concrete, dada, and many others, but I appreciate the information none the less, thank you.
Re: Dream Boy by indiechic656	6-Aug-03/3:41 AM
Good clean pining sonnet.
Re: a comment on all american machine by nolan	6-Aug-03/2:21 AM
The last time I did that... It had one eye and a beard with a stinky incoherant mumble.
Re: a comment on all american machine by nolan	6-Aug-03/2:20 AM
What, four arabs with straight razors in a plane bound for buildings full of people wasn't massive enough for you? Stick around, you'll get your fucking weapons of mass destruction in one form or another, and then you'll be arguing some other lightless angle. Wake up, how many ways can you cook chicken? Well that's how many ways that we can get cooked by these rock a bye jehova witnesses minus the smiles and shower.
Re: Puerto Rican Tequila by Don-Quixote	6-Aug-03/2:03 AM
The last stanza fails to surmise the gist of your message. Perhaps, close with another observation on the drink that you're writing about.
Re: The Edge by princesszoe	4-Aug-03/4:30 PM
Could you go to Sea instead?