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Day Of Reckoning (Lyric) by Kitch Deep down I know we canât last,
Without trust this love wonât survive,
I feel guilty for having a past,
One day soon our fate will arrive.
I dread that confrontation,
For I know it will break us,
But living a lie is degradation,
And sleeping feelings will one day wake us.
You never loved who I really was,
Is it any wonder why Iâm so clearly lost,
You thought you could mould me,
And I let you control me,
Because I donât even know who I am,
Am I who I was ?
Or your idea of a man?
Youâre so suspicious when I go out,
And you class infidelity as even talking to someone,
Do you think Iâd just fuck the first girl whoâd pout,
Go back to her place and get it on?
Iâm so tired of living a lie,
Pretending for the most part that everythingâs fine,
It seems with tears I have an endless supply,
You want me caged but I want to shine.
Well the dreaded day is beckoning,
This will be our reckoning,
You will hate me stronger than you loved me,
And I will search for who I am.
Up the ladder:
Demonic Chef
Down the ladder:
Fuck Me Like Love Fucks Me (changed)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Posted: August 12, 2003 9:20 AM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2003 12:12 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.179294 Overall Rank: 4818 Comments:
It's good for you.
mulberry is right with what they said. It does need a little work. I can't judge much though due to all my working sucking as of late. I can understand everything you're saying to well. I just got out of a relationship a few months ago that was just like what you wrote about. Felt the same way. -9- (Only because it brought back the memories I had once felt)
Do you read these out loud after you write them ? There are so many " forced rhymes " and clichés that it's painful to read. I would suggest that you look at the lyrics of real songs like Lennon's " Jealous Guy " and Reed's " Endlessly Jealous " to see how you can say so much with so little. Think about metaphors, symbolism, and even using catch phrases to renew this write. As it is, needs a lot of work.
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Do you think Iâd just fuck the first girl whoâd pout," Instead of asking the partner that question, say what the partner WOULD think, in the narrator's opinion.