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Fuck Me Like Love Fucks Me (changed) (Free verse) by Son Of A Bitch
Why can't we just fuck? And fuck getting in the mood, Why can't the Queen take the rook, And conversation be lewd? How was your day darling? Oh fine darling, Am I Prince Charming? Am I Fuck. Conversations have limitations, So why are we living a lie? I don't give a fuck about the good book, I just want to cook, C'mon fry. Making love is for the meek, Who validate sex by staying around to speak, Penis is cock, Vagina is cunt, Tell me to stop, When you start to grunt, Say it as it is, And live how you think, Take me to the limit, Then leave me at the brink. Ladies for society, Whores for the bedroom, Men for sobriety, Scores on the gilded loom. Give me an inch, And I'll take the metric, The way that we think, Its fucking pathetic.

Up the ladder: Day Of Reckoning
Down the ladder: Our Love Our Life

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4819
Posted: August 15, 2003 11:22 AM PDT; Last modified: August 15, 2003 12:47 PM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 15-Aug-03/11:47 AM | Reply
"Scores on the headboard" change 'headboard' to gilded loom.

Perhaps you should be spayed or nuetered?
[n/a] Son Of A Bitch @ 195.92.168.168 > horus8 | 15-Aug-03/12:09 PM | Reply
Yes and Yes your right and right.
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > Son Of A Bitch | 15-Aug-03/12:26 PM | Reply
'gilded' not 'glided' you fucking maniac.
[n/a] Son Of A Bitch @ 195.92.168.168 > Bachus | 15-Aug-03/12:48 PM | Reply
Sorry I got porno burns on my eyes.
[n/a] Son Of A Bitch @ 195.92.168.168 > Bachus | 15-Aug-03/12:48 PM | Reply
That fakking rocks now me cocker, thanks.
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > Son Of A Bitch | 15-Aug-03/1:00 PM | Reply
Ferkin aye.
[10] eliastemplar @ 216.147.132.9 | 15-Aug-03/12:29 PM | Reply
Very good. It set off my turrets. I like the way it flows. I enjoyed every word. I can't stand poems that have lots of filler. People concentrate too much on an attractive presentation and end up putting too much pen to paper.

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[10] Sir.Psycho.Sexy @ 159.134.55.61 | 15-Aug-03/2:45 PM | Reply
FUCKING LOVE IT.LOVE IT!!

what about horus,look at mine

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