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Our Love Our Life (Lyric) by hotwire
Bily Foster
The love you give is incredibly strong
So endlessly giving with it I can't go wrong
It gives me the strength to try harder
To push the limits of myself to go farther
Because I know when it gets to be too much
You will help and protect me while I work to get back in touch
Your love is so sacred to me only gets called upon in an emergency
The rest of the time we know it's there
Even if we don't know each others daily worries or cares
Our love and friendship never dies just because we live separate lives
Our paths cross in times of need & when it's convenient for you and me
I'll love you forever because you're a part of my soul
Part of what makes me completely whole
It doesn't matter who hurt who or how it's been
Because in the future it won't be like that again
Weather we're mad or sad or just missing each other
Realize our experiences help shape one another
Our lives will intermingle again because we never let go of friends
So never fret because you'll always know
That I'm here for you when you need to let go
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.179294
Overall Rank: 4820
Posted: September 25, 2003 9:17 AM PDT; Last modified: September 25, 2003 9:17 AM PDT
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Otherwise this is abrilliant poem with just the right amount of intrigue, symbolism and realism. I particularly liked the beautifully worked sting in the tail which i'm sure no one could have anticipated.