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Our Love Our Life (Lyric) by hotwire

Bily Foster The love you give is incredibly strong So endlessly giving with it I can't go wrong It gives me the strength to try harder To push the limits of myself to go farther Because I know when it gets to be too much You will help and protect me while I work to get back in touch Your love is so sacred to me only gets called upon in an emergency The rest of the time we know it's there Even if we don't know each others daily worries or cares Our love and friendship never dies just because we live separate lives Our paths cross in times of need & when it's convenient for you and me I'll love you forever because you're a part of my soul Part of what makes me completely whole It doesn't matter who hurt who or how it's been Because in the future it won't be like that again Weather we're mad or sad or just missing each other Realize our experiences help shape one another Our lives will intermingle again because we never let go of friends So never fret because you'll always know That I'm here for you when you need to let go

==Doylum 25-Sep-03/9:33 AM
You live separate lives? Why i've never heard of anything quite so confoundedly ridiculous, or selfish, in all my time here 'pon peomranker What were you thinking?
Otherwise this is abrilliant poem with just the right amount of intrigue, symbolism and realism. I particularly liked the beautifully worked sting in the tail which i'm sure no one could have anticipated.




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