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The Edge (Free verse) by princesszoe
Small dancing soul
At the edge of the earth
I feel it lose control
As the floss of the surf
Feels me growing old
My feet are getting cold
Wonder what it means to those
Who know?
Now someone reads me through
The script of my long life
As I have no children left
Whose voices may suffice
What chimes through the folds,
Is the feeling I controlled
Most all my life and many
Different aspects
Now here I stand, the end in sight
Relax my arms and stop the fight
Feel the world move right through me
Close my eyes and go to sleep.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Weighted score: 5.192101
Overall Rank: 4633
Posted: August 4, 2003 4:04 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 4:10 PM PDT
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