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The Edge (Free verse) by princesszoe
Small dancing soul At the edge of the earth I feel it lose control As the floss of the surf Feels me growing old My feet are getting cold Wonder what it means to those Who know? Now someone reads me through The script of my long life As I have no children left Whose voices may suffice What chimes through the folds, Is the feeling I controlled Most all my life and many Different aspects Now here I stand, the end in sight Relax my arms and stop the fight Feel the world move right through me Close my eyes and go to sleep.

Up the ladder: My Goddess...
Down the ladder: Dream Boy

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Weighted score: 5.192101
Overall Rank: 4633
Posted: August 4, 2003 4:04 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 4:10 PM PDT
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-Aug-03/4:30 PM | Reply
Could you go to Sea instead?
[n/a] princesszoe @ 203.111.1.70 | 4-Aug-03/5:05 PM | Reply
yes, i could. thank you.
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