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Dream Boy (Sonnet) by indiechic656
The deepest green to ever walk the earth; Two swirling pools of neverending light. Expressive when in sadness and in mirth, his eyes are always such a joyous sight. From far away, I see him standing there, and fruitlessly attempt to meet his gaze. Then turn around, and see her flip her hair, and know that he has slipped into a daze. He smiles then, and light reaches his eyes, Though meant for her, those sparkles touch my soul. And in my joy, i'm sure i don't disguise, that only in his presence am I whole. Just two good friends is all we'll ever be, I wish his eyes would sparkle just for me.

Up the ladder: The Edge
Down the ladder: on your birthday

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Weighted score: 5.192101
Overall Rank: 4634
Posted: August 5, 2003 8:53 PM PDT; Last modified: August 5, 2003 8:53 PM PDT
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[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Aug-03/3:41 AM | Reply
Good clean pining sonnet.
[n/a] indiechic656 @ 68.111.213.38 > Bachus | 6-Aug-03/10:37 PM | Reply
Hey thanks, check out my other poems, they're called 'A Reason to Live', 'Disappearing', and 'A Best Friend Lost' (sonnet, free verse, and free verse, respectively)! thanks!
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