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10-Jan-03/1:25 PM |
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make this a villanella macabella with the "25 minutes with u"..that would be powerful shite.e
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10-Jan-03/1:26 PM |
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they didn't give you 20 sets?l
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| Re: lost love by cherish |
10-Jan-03/2:07 PM |
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yes, i concure, do you concure horus?o
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| Re: his hair is an acid trip by blurryphotograph |
10-Jan-03/6:31 PM |
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it's david lee roth no!!!!!!!!
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| Re: Jericho by goldfish |
12-Jan-03/12:37 PM |
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A termagant in a jumpsuit. ???
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| Re: oh it hurt so much by w~* ATHENA *~w |
12-Jan-03/12:42 PM |
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12-Jan-03/1:04 PM |
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so, you did fuckface below with no qualms, but -dashed- the fuckings in the poem?Also: do you think you're clever and subtextual? let me kbow..these things facinate me. that and goat cheese.
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| Re: Untitled by purplestain |
12-Jan-03/1:08 PM |
i've found you four titles.
!)machine-readable
2)syncopation
3)Has anyone seen my pants.
4)i bought a cat named rat
what do you think?$
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| Re: Rose Wall by Carvaceous |
12-Jan-03/1:20 PM |
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| Re: You're the Only One by Chels85 |
12-Jan-03/1:25 PM |
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for fucks sake. i just heard the "it's a small world afterall" theme song to this, but god knows if i vote with bias they'll mock me. call me racist, and if i vote with awe and glossy eyes they'll say i'm a dolt. if you let your parents stand in the way of a nice rock hard black cock.than it wasn't love and you're a fool...do you know who "they" are? my shoe laces and zippers. 5..
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| Re: Unwanted Return by PawnedTidal |
12-Jan-03/1:27 PM |
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add two lines and this would be a sonnet, maybe it already is??
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| Re: God and Country by dougsoderstrom |
12-Jan-03/1:29 PM |
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radical. "SWAGGER AWARD FOR MISSILES AND JESUS IN A SUPER COMPACT HAIKU WITH EVEN A PEW TOO" nice one.
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| Re: betsy's hands by onepinksock |
12-Jan-03/1:30 PM |
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i have a rule against the word angel in poetry, but this is a masterful piece..have a 10.
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| Re: Thank You Mom by savannah |
12-Jan-03/1:33 PM |
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yeah, thanks mom.you fucking ancient gorge in the side of my mind. can i get a little vagina juice to go with my gaea enima. yeah thanks mom. for your history too, and that lucky scarf. bitch. take all my tens like you burned my captain caveman doll..rotten snatch.w
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
13-Jan-03/2:39 AM |
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666 the mark of the yeast.
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| Re: Daywalker by Blade |
13-Jan-03/2:42 AM |
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you are to soda, what a straw is to ass fucking. did i say soda? i meant cream of wheat.
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| Re: Another Day by Brighteyes |
13-Jan-03/2:45 AM |
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why bother? we could use the extra oxygen at the rate we're hacking down trees.
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13-Jan-03/2:47 AM |
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| Re: Nature's Artistry by Quarton |
13-Jan-03/2:50 AM |
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so what you're saying is...don't talk to strangers..unless they have candy?
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| Re: Seasoning a new tank by Cha no Onna |
14-Jan-03/12:29 PM |
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Tell that to the atlantians. Your tank has to much ammonia and nitrite in it. Change your water, and improve your filters. Buy a cichclid to dispose of the gold fish
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