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You're the Only One

Member since 2002 · Posted 18 Sep 2002 · 5 comments

You're the only one that can make me smile, But yet the only one that can make me cry You overwhelmed me with your love Yet we still had to say good-bye. I ask myself why does this have to be Because the reason were apart isn't because of you or me. The problem is, it's not me feeling this way It's my parents history, Their driving us away I ask the Lord above, Why do you have to be the one I love But then I realized, You're the only man with those eyes And it shouldn't matter what color of skin, And that we will be together in the end!

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[3] god'swife 18-Sep-02/10:51 PM Reply

The sentiment of the last 3 couplets is so beautiful, but this needs reconstructive surgery. The whole "you're the only one" line needs to be dropped. It's been used to death. Most of this is pretty bad. It's a vocal desert.

[2] royalflesh 18-Sep-02/10:54 PM Reply

oh kay. life's a bitch, hey?

[10] -=SeTTle=- 4-Jan-03/10:17 PM Reply

Good work

[6] RGallet 8-Jan-03/11:36 AM Reply

gldsdl Able aooe

[5] Bachus 12-Jan-03/1:25 PM Reply

for fucks sake. i just heard the "it's a small world afterall" theme song to this, but god knows if i vote with bias they'll mock me. call me racist, and if i vote with awe and glossy eyes they'll say i'm a dolt. if you let your parents stand in the way of a nice rock hard black cock.than it wasn't love and you're a fool...do you know who "they" are? my shoe laces and zippers. 5..