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his hair is an acid trip (Free verse) by blurryphotograph his hair is an acid trip
cascading down his pebble features
in a fountain of color music and laughter.
his curls bounce along creating
mystical magical fantasies
in the minds of innocent girls.
they laugh and giggle
and whisper and murmur
of the world around them
they moan when
he in an instant
silences their voices
with a purple bandana.
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Posted: January 10, 2003 5:54 PM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2003 5:54 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.576303 Overall Rank: 2375 Comments:
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nentwined @ 66.92.183.34
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10-Jan-03/6:07 PM
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umm. erm. hrm. interesting?
jimmi hendrix, robert plant, or steven tyler...wait jerry garcia...i just got the montery rock festival on dvd..jimmies set, just kicks ass..he does this version of like a rolling stone that's un fucking real..truly...great poem by the way, and title.
it's david lee roth no!!!!!!!!
when i first scanned it my mind said banana, and i just kinda laughed..you know what i mean?
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