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Extra Ordinary (Free verse) by eviltwin
Into the world of heroes Fire-breathing dragons With an arch-nemesis to conquer True love and high adventure All is fantasy Fiction Lies. I close the book Turn off the movie Return to myself And my life Where no one is a superhero Love is false and rare And dragons have long since disappeared. It is a bittersweet reality That my life is not Extraordinary It is just extra Ordinary.

Up the ladder: spirit of a grama
Down the ladder: his hair is an acid trip

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.142857
Weighted score: 5.576303
Overall Rank: 2374
Posted: July 23, 2002 4:17 PM PDT; Last modified: July 23, 2002 4:17 PM PDT
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[10] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Aug-02/1:22 AM | Reply
> (this has nothing to do with you evil twin just ryan and the others) (just go to the chat area to get the back story..you no the one that fucks your e-mail with the air of uppitiness!....oh no! i've lost... "godwinks flaw" awe.. what if i wasn't trying to win(win what?).this isn't an argument or a contest..and fuck your laws! you can quote the laws of physics to your head gear ladened niece until she defies gravity and sits on telephone wires with rolling pigeons. (by the way there is not one hitler or nazi reference in what i wrote only "dictator-esque" don't make me define the difference..you're really not worth the trouble, but be accurate if you're gonna talk shit) (and nazis weren't the first to burn books nor will they be the last <alexandria> <constantanople>)(you guys even suck at stereotyping symbolism? jesus fucking christ why am i even writing this?) and why can't that individual (ryan) speak on their own. ??what a bunch of arrogant cockholds, i am literally wobbling on the verge of a most unsavory rant...pullback..must.control..ok. i'm amused, to say the least, but i have to ask ..is this a joke? ??i mean your joking right? ??are you all that elite and above it? attention, attention, as the illiterate rate in america soars, these noblemen and scholars fondel eachothers nerdtits until they all go and LOL!ah. ha.ha. ??i am so amused by how serious you take all this bullshit that i'm blabbin, but what? not your own writing? e-mail me some of your "work" please , u might suprise me. <fuck you>, spineless shephards run from storms then blame nature for their loss. i ??blame nothing, not even your pompous inability to communicate. what specialists!, what radicals!...oh my pussy hurts..please don't write fuck in my comment boxes..i might feel dirty and finger bang my cat with a double A battery. there is no difference between fuck and "polysyllabic" or cunt or motherfucker..i have to read third grade recapitualations on summer camp and lover removal and god, and god and jesus and then they're is all of these(on this site) other satanist cry babys (remember satanists don't cry cuz they fuck and kill babies) it's hillarious(but i don't mind writing is NEUTRAL BUT OPINIONATED and i live by it), and then there's the council of elders and various "laws" are you guys that fucking bored and stuck on eachother's blow dryer ass kissing? what the fuck? are you that "not in control of your real life" that you have to scrape that low? fine you win. keep your laws. and your sense of right <cuz you don't write>, and your lol, and all of that other ripped off shit and abbrvs, and your hand on your dictionaries, so you can impress and giggle like politicians overweight and overpaid fighting over the greasy pork rib of the day("should we do this", "or how about that".."Oh i don't know they might sue", what the fuck are you talking about? do me a favor steal my shit and wipe your asses with it. it would be the most penetrating point to touch your pinched asses since your thumb magic of old in the bath tub when no one was looking) i bow to you over informed "eyes' of god "...{mob scene voice over}"you call those blinder's?" said louie the lamb to one knuckle sam, "naw that's a wall boss, and a tall one at that". enjoy. your restrictions you deserve every fucking bit of it. p.s {dark a} was right, this side of the fence is SIDELESS! where condoms please! prevent your own cloning. save me the trouble of climbing the clock tower. Lol right! ASl.yeah! lol.such a clever bunch i never stood a chance........... bye ryan.. i thought we connected... love is strange, but stupidity is priceless..west nile to you all and to all a..(fill in the rest with one of your strategic "laws") you need the practice! (by the way this poem is greaaat 10, and this comment above has nothing to do with this poem, thank you evil twin for the space))
[10] ==Doylum @ 80.225.182.6 | 2-Nov-03/8:34 AM | Reply
How on earth can fiction lie? How can you have your pudding if you don't eat yer meat If you don't eat your meat how can you have any pudding. To lie is to intentionally decive, fiction does not try to decive we've got documentaries, government reports and newspapers for that. That aside everything else seems in order especally line 13 & 14.
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