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Extra Ordinary (Free verse) by eviltwin

Into the world of heroes Fire-breathing dragons With an arch-nemesis to conquer True love and high adventure All is fantasy Fiction Lies. I close the book Turn off the movie Return to myself And my life Where no one is a superhero Love is false and rare And dragons have long since disappeared. It is a bittersweet reality That my life is not Extraordinary It is just extra Ordinary.

==Doylum 2-Nov-03/8:34 AM
How on earth can fiction lie? How can you have your pudding if you don't eat yer meat If you don't eat your meat how can you have any pudding. To lie is to intentionally decive, fiction does not try to decive we've got documentaries, government reports and newspapers for that. That aside everything else seems in order especally line 13 & 14.
10/10.




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