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Free verse № 10064

Untitled

Member since 2002 · Posted 20 Aug 2002 · 2 comments

I cannot help it Could not accept it if I tried All these feelings I'm trying to hide It keeps haunting me day and night The same old heartbeat With the emptiness I have inside I feel a tremendous pain When I want to stop the force that keeps me going on I am almost complete because of you There is no other better feeling than this I just want you to be near me To be here with me I could almost feel you holding me And telling me everything will be just right Without you I would be alone Lost and empty and forlorn I would rather be in love with you

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[6] SoulSlippedAway 20-Aug-02/11:21 AM Reply
that was pretty good
[7] Bachus 12-Jan-03/1:08 PM Reply
i've found you four titles.
!)machine-readable
2)syncopation
3)Has anyone seen my pants.
4)i bought a cat named rat

what do you think?$