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Untitled (Free verse) by purplestain
I cannot help it
Could not accept it if I tried
All these feelings I'm trying to hide
It keeps haunting me day and night
The same old heartbeat
With the emptiness I have inside
I feel a tremendous pain
When I want to stop the force that keeps me going on
I am almost complete because of you
There is no other better feeling than this
I just want you to be near me
To be here with me
I could almost feel you holding me
And telling me everything will be just right
Without you I would be alone
Lost and empty and forlorn
I would rather be in love with you
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10786
Posted: August 20, 2002 12:17 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 12:17 AM PDT
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