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Untitled (Free verse) by purplestain
I cannot help it Could not accept it if I tried All these feelings I'm trying to hide It keeps haunting me day and night The same old heartbeat With the emptiness I have inside I feel a tremendous pain When I want to stop the force that keeps me going on I am almost complete because of you There is no other better feeling than this I just want you to be near me To be here with me I could almost feel you holding me And telling me everything will be just right Without you I would be alone Lost and empty and forlorn I would rather be in love with you

Up the ladder: The Day I Left You
Down the ladder: Suicide I

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6
Weighted score: 4.833116
Overall Rank: 10780
Posted: August 20, 2002 12:17 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2002 12:17 AM PDT
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[6] SoulSlippedAway @ 65.71.152.136 | 20-Aug-02/11:21 AM | Reply
that was pretty good
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Jan-03/1:08 PM | Reply
i've found you four titles.
!)machine-readable
2)syncopation
3)Has anyone seen my pants.
4)i bought a cat named rat

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