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Rose Wall (Free verse) by Carvaceous
I painted roses on my wall Wearily I watch and wait for them to grow tall Day after day As I sit They stay The same red, red And my countenance pallors Yet they bloom Even through the Winter's gloom Oh how I wish they'd break and drop For I fear they'll never grow nor end and stop
Up the ladder: Corny.
Down the ladder: Now We are Half
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9658
Posted: January 12, 2003 8:23 AM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2003 8:23 AM PST
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[8] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 12-Jan-03/1:20 PM | Reply
worthwhile.
[8] Topaz Servias @ 68.100.154.95 | 12-Jan-03/6:59 PM | Reply
This is like....ummmm....a hopeless endevour?
[1] poetandknowit @ 67.40.59.20 | 12-Jan-03/10:46 PM | Reply
Sounds like a poem written in high school at best. But good try.
[8] hipster flare @ 209.68.66.47 | 13-Jan-03/9:57 AM | Reply
they won't grow. they're made of paint, you silly goose! (just kidding) a valliant attempt! an 8.
[n/a] Ellie95 @ 216.209.123.72 | 3-Mar-03/5:17 PM | Reply
cool I like this one!
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