Now We are Half

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Jan 2003 · Edited 12 Mar 2003 · 3 comments

Now we are half. Inside out Insides out Trying to heal. The distance between us Gapes open. The pain intensifies with every advance. Only memories are left; The moment we realized We are one of the same, Swimming in the sea With you in winter, Or the final moment Four eyes looking Blindly, Choosing a life of lonesome Loathsome indifference Rather than the acknowledgement of self.

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[8] Ranger 15-Jan-03/5:56 AM Reply

Like a Siamese twin. I'll give you an eight for this, mainly because I like it.

[7] Sawa 12-Mar-03/3:02 PM Reply

I enjoyed the wordplay muchly.

[8] horus8 13-Mar-03/3:11 AM Reply

Yep.