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Now We are Half (Free verse) by Roisin Now we are half.
Inside out
Insides out
Trying to heal.
The distance between us
Gapes open.
The pain intensifies with every advance.
Only memories are left;
The moment we realized
We are one of the same,
Swimming in the sea
With you in winter,
Or the final moment
Four eyes looking
Blindly,
Choosing a life of lonesome
Loathsome indifference
Rather than the acknowledgement of self.
Up the ladder:
Rose Wall
Down the ladder:
Seattle Seasons
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Posted: January 15, 2003 5:52 AM PST; Last modified: March 12, 2003 9:31 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.9103527 Overall Rank: 9653 Comments:
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Ranger @ 212.219.142.161
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15-Jan-03/5:56 AM
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Like a Siamese twin. I'll give you an eight for this, mainly because I like it.
I enjoyed the wordplay muchly.
Yep.
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