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Now We are Half (Free verse) by Roisin

Now we are half. Inside out Insides out Trying to heal. The distance between us Gapes open. The pain intensifies with every advance. Only memories are left; The moment we realized We are one of the same, Swimming in the sea With you in winter, Or the final moment Four eyes looking Blindly, Choosing a life of lonesome Loathsome indifference Rather than the acknowledgement of self.

Ranger 15-Jan-03/5:56 AM
Like a Siamese twin. I'll give you an eight for this, mainly because I like it.




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