poemranker ::Corny. by Plasticgirlwithgun

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Free verse № 30062

Corny.

Member since 2002 · Posted 13 Dec 2002 · 3 comments

When I see a boy with his septum pierced I melt A big chunk of melt going through his skin A cute little hoop twisting around his nose The way he talks The way he acts Just fascinates me Only if boys with their septum pierced Would get the balls and come and talk to me.

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[3] god'swife 13-Dec-02/8:29 AM Reply
Yeah, there is nothing cornier then a pierced septum!!??? Not to mention more poetic. why don't you get his name tattooed across the back of your neck.
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun › god'swife 13-Dec-02/10:58 AM Reply
I would but I am not old enough...
[6] UnityMitford 13-Dec-02/9:17 AM Reply
if you put "pierced" in parentheses after "balls," it could really do something for me and my unpierced septum. i, personally, like guys and girls with pierced sternums. that is HOT!