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Corny. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun
When I see a boy with his septum pierced I melt A big chunk of melt going through his skin A cute little hoop twisting around his nose The way he talks The way he acts Just fascinates me Only if boys with their septum pierced Would get the balls and come and talk to me.

Up the ladder: hallway
Down the ladder: Rose Wall

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9651
Posted: December 13, 2002 7:38 AM PST; Last modified: December 13, 2002 7:38 AM PST
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[3] god'swife @ 209.179.212.226 | 13-Dec-02/8:29 AM | Reply
Yeah, there is nothing cornier then a pierced septum!!??? Not to mention more poetic. why don't you get his name tattooed across the back of your neck.
[n/a] Plasticgirlwithgun @ 172.144.1.23 > god'swife | 13-Dec-02/10:58 AM | Reply
I would but I am not old enough...
[6] UnityMitford @ 167.206.181.179 | 13-Dec-02/9:17 AM | Reply
if you put "pierced" in parentheses after "balls," it could really do something for me and my unpierced septum. i, personally, like guys and girls with pierced sternums. that is HOT!
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