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hallway (Free verse) by blackball
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I generate false hopes within myself.
for no good reason i lie awake deep into the night.
thinking, feeling and yet not understanding.
no more rush to feel, no more pain to sense, only deaf actions that fall
within a breath.
why don't you feel it?
it's in all of us, below the surface to finally, willingly be tapped and
appreciated.
i knew it before you came and i can still hear you now
pacing the narrow halls deep within your body
twice you leave, you can't go back inside me
all i asked for was a simple, beautiful scream
instead you give it up in a flash of nothing
it, i, you, they, all of us left you here without a soul, without a love,
without a breath
breathless, lifeless...loveliness.
don't fight your passion, it has the power to bring you to your knees or
lift you up beyond pleasure
let five words bind your soul to mine: "does it feel any better?"
of course it doesn't
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Weighted score: 4.9103527
Overall Rank: 9655
Posted: November 24, 2002 11:21 PM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2002 12:11 AM PST
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