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Corny. (Free verse) by Plasticgirlwithgun

When I see a boy with his septum pierced I melt A big chunk of melt going through his skin A cute little hoop twisting around his nose The way he talks The way he acts Just fascinates me Only if boys with their septum pierced Would get the balls and come and talk to me.

UnityMitford 13-Dec-02/9:17 AM
if you put "pierced" in parentheses after "balls," it could really do something for me and my unpierced septum. i, personally, like guys and girls with pierced sternums. that is HOT!




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