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Rose Wall (Free verse) by Carvaceous

I painted roses on my wall Wearily I watch and wait for them to grow tall Day after day As I sit They stay The same red, red And my countenance pallors Yet they bloom Even through the Winter's gloom Oh how I wish they'd break and drop For I fear they'll never grow nor end and stop

poetandknowit 12-Jan-03/10:46 PM
Sounds like a poem written in high school at best. But good try.




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