regarding some deleted poem...	7-Oct-03/6:56 PM
ha ha haaaAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU'VE GOT TO BE KIDDING ME? ha haaa ha. try again, that motherfucking poem was more contrived then man on boy sex in the Vatican. Good grief and good riddance... caramel angels ha ha haaahhahah jesus fuckin'hairoweena i've seen it all now. 5.
Re: Primal Reality by peaceseeker	7-Oct-03/7:04 PM
my only critique would be it should be compressed by two. In other words each line should take on the line below it doubling each line but making the actual physical poem smaller by a half.
Re: Never Love A Poet by Caducus	9-Oct-03/9:27 AM
Robert Johnson's "Phonograph blues". (That's what I was listening to while just reading this). How are you? I missed you.
Re: Timmy Christ didn't like Dr. Seuss by Y2kSlamPoet	9-Oct-03/9:30 AM
"the day children killed Jesus's great grandson." I would drop this line altogether, and end at the line before it.
Re: facku by J.B. Manning	9-Oct-03/10:55 AM
Do.
Re: Reptilian by Christof	9-Oct-03/10:59 AM
ha haa haa, you crack me up. brilliant ending my two notes would only be: "You bastard snake, again, and again." And a typo with comma correction in S1. 9.
Re: B.F. by skaskowski	9-Oct-03/3:55 PM
Lai
regarding some deleted poem...	9-Oct-03/4:17 PM
A tipper.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/12:16 PM
Unreadable rubbish.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/12:18 PM
Ha Ha ha!!!!! I gave this shit a zero it was at #8 on the best list and it went to #1?!!!!! Ahhhhhhh, that figures.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/12:21 PM
On a third reading, this is getting enjoyable.
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/12:30 PM
"or will gunpowder thin, run with fire." I would end at 'thin' and put 'run with fire' somewhere deeper in the poem.
Re: Screw u all! by Blade	10-Oct-03/1:03 PM
Before you go... could you remove my penis from the worst list? It's been up there for over a year, see, and it's beginning to feel a slight draft.
Re: sex sex sex! by FreeFormFixation	10-Oct-03/1:34 PM
Some good poems today from you, congratulations. 9
Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	10-Oct-03/8:02 PM
Artie? If and when you are done licking his comatose balls and changing his feeding straw... could you get out of the way, pass the salt. wipe off your faCE! AND SHUT THE FUCK UP!? Thanks!
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Oct-03/8:06 PM
I would love you a lot more if you'd get off my foot.
Re: For W. by A. Nomaly	10-Oct-03/8:52 PM
Indeed, a killer.
Re: "I know what you need!" by A. Nomaly	10-Oct-03/9:37 PM
Touchinng the bottom of a lake with bare feet is the grossest thought imaginable.
Re: ٠صادر فلسطينية أن الاحتلال by Wobble McFly	13-Oct-03/1:11 PM
A Sandnigger pigeon taking out my radiator.
Re: Not On Your Nelly by Wobble McFly	13-Oct-03/1:12 PM
This is charming.