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sex sex sex! (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation
Red-lipped and lovely, she
wrapped herself around me.
a breadbasket continental shelf
shifted below
as i struggled for
Footing.
Blue-lipped and lonely, i
cringed as your fingers touched me.
isolated on the ocean floor
i withered below,
and my bubbles were
Bursting.
White-lipped and lively, she
strapped her legs around me.
a rickety wooden floor
creaked below
and i begged for
Mercy.
Black-lipped and lewdly, i
pine for you to soothe me.
clawed eyes cauterized
burned below.
i blindly sang,
I'm Empty.
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Overall Rank: 8723
Posted: October 10, 2003 12:48 AM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 12:48 AM PDT
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Another really nice bit of work. Cool format - it suits the piece.