| Re: Conform by oldschool |
26-Sep-03/12:41 PM |
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| Re: Life's Work by baughworm |
26-Sep-03/12:42 PM |
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In the end it begins to show promise.
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| Re: >~{In the Shadow of a Crooked Ceiling}~< by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
26-Sep-03/12:50 PM |
I loved how you confused star trek for starwars, and then later, them both, for Chud-Tron. lol
A couple of errors "No, more that a machine," than,
and there was another in there too. So here's a 9.
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| Re: AND A NICE CUP OF CHAR by Garrett S Sexton |
26-Sep-03/12:55 PM |
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In New South Whales we head shoot our palfrey and grow are own thyme shrubbers. 5 fur the tittle
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| Re: swamp of devils by crwncka1 |
26-Sep-03/1:01 PM |
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This poem would be a perfect companion piece to the sound of a turd trying to pull itself back together the day after a relentlessly pounding rain storm.
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26-Sep-03/1:26 PM |
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Trend setter, I'm better, I whip my nose with the sheets of an overweight bed wetter.
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| Re: Ode to the Renesis by INTRANSIT |
26-Sep-03/1:30 PM |
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Your time will arrive my friend. Sorry, about the Settle thing, he made me swear on the back of a square.
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| Re: Intersection poetry by INTRANSIT |
26-Sep-03/1:34 PM |
I would give it a companion piece in another stanza the same size.
Like:
At the bottom
of the post, hops
A blind crow
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26-Sep-03/1:39 PM |
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Ha ha ahh. I see you've made fine use of all of that time alone in that truck's cab.
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| Re: Wasted Words by ho_hum |
27-Sep-03/12:30 PM |
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Except, the word of THE CRAFTY JESU!
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2-Oct-03/11:37 AM |
"If you look all the sponges" you'd need visine. 'took'.
Answer to 1 = It wouldn't be any "deeper" or 'denser' or shallower. it would be an ecological catastrophe.
#2 Light acrobatic Asians qand or levitating pariahs.
#3 Sign makers aren't intelligent enough to strike, not to mention there is no factory that makes signs, they're homemade 99% of the time the other 1% they are borrowed.
#4 as far back as you are currently
#5 Because you posted it on a site where people read poetry and other forms of writing to be read in return.
#6 Because I have no legs.
#7 Eating luckycharms and perhaps a bit of laundry before interviewing Gary Coleman.
#8 BECAUSE HE'S A BLACK MIDGET RUNNING FOR OFFICE.
here's a question for you?
Why do you keep shaving your chimpanzee and taking him for longwalks on cold days?
Answer: Because you are A Monkey abuser.
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| Re: time's concubine by skaskowski |
2-Oct-03/11:48 AM |
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So-So. I've seen better from you.
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| Re: Desire by revy13 |
2-Oct-03/12:00 PM |
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The last time I smelled a Temptation? he spun around splashing lukewarm jerry curl juice upon my naked buttocks. Naturally, I instantly climaxed in a heap of off Navy blue jelly and fuzzy toenail clipping pearljam to suck my thumb and coo. LIKE A REAL MAN in an unreal world full of hate and 7 elevens. I'm so sad so so damn sad *sniffle*.
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| Re: a rapid expenditure by skaskowski |
2-Oct-03/12:02 PM |
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3-Oct-03/12:44 PM |
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Don't look at me. I give the Green Five!
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3-Oct-03/12:46 PM |
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Erm... And...For NO REASON! MUAHAHAHA AHKKDEERBLITHPUTY sorry i just inhaled my roaching cherry. Blahch.
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| Re: The man, the world by INTRANSIT |
3-Oct-03/12:51 PM |
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ahaaahhaahahahah, feezus that was ahoot. 9.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
3-Oct-03/8:21 PM |
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I see you tossed the foundational piece that my parody was built around? Have no fear I'll never get rid of mine, and we'll always have that together my love.
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3-Oct-03/9:30 PM |
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| Re: The Swallower (Oh brother!) by Spanish Devil by Bachus |
7-Oct-03/6:29 PM |
The sheer genius is in the kneading of the dough. Yeah, so what if I'm into getting my nails done? it's better then using my teeth.
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