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Screw u all! (Haiku) by Blade All my poems suck arse
why do i even bother
I will shoot myself
Up the ladder:
Wit and Eloquence
Down the ladder:
The Snowglobe
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Posted: October 10, 2003 1:33 AM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 1:33 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11820 Comments:
Before you go... could you remove my penis from the worst list? It's been up there for over a year, see, and it's beginning to feel a slight draft.
Cheers you guys its nice to have people on my side for once ("sniff") but i will now have to eat you all!
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but there's one extra syllable in the first line.
and it's more senryu than haiku (gesundheit).