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Screw u all! (Haiku) by Blade

All my poems suck arse why do i even bother I will shoot myself

Shuushin 10-Oct-03/3:37 AM
I haven't seen any of your others, but this one isn't too bad,

but there's one extra syllable in the first line.

and it's more senryu than haiku (gesundheit).




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