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Haiku № 69682

"I know what you need!"

by A. Nomaly

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Oct 2003 · 5 comments

Who said falling down wasnt fun? crashing thru lily pads and there's swans

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5 comments

[10] sliver 10-Oct-03/8:32 PM Reply
Quite possibly the best haiku since Steven King's.
Your hair is fine
Like January embers
My heart burns there too
[7] Bachus 10-Oct-03/9:37 PM Reply
Touchinng the bottom of a lake with bare feet is the grossest thought imaginable.
[n/a] Shuushin 11-Oct-03/5:25 AM Reply
no.... no - NOT THE SWANS!
[n/a] un_oying 11-Oct-03/6:50 PM Reply
gre8t
[6] nentwined 24-May-05/7:07 PM Reply
Umm. Haiku in spirit, esque, but. Hmm.

No, but I like it. I'd appreciate it a lot more if you'd gotten it into 5-7-5.