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"I know what you need!" (Haiku) by A. Nomaly
Who said falling down wasnt fun? crashing thru lily pads and there's swans
Up the ladder: Tailor Made
Down the ladder: Birmingham gardens
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.537883
Overall Rank: 2579
Posted: October 10, 2003 7:51 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2003 7:51 PM PDT
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[10] sliver @ 63.190.64.11 | 10-Oct-03/8:32 PM | Reply
Quite possibly the best haiku since Steven King's.
Your hair is fine
Like January embers
My heart burns there too
[7] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Oct-03/9:37 PM | Reply
Touchinng the bottom of a lake with bare feet is the grossest thought imaginable.
[n/a] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 11-Oct-03/5:25 AM | Reply
no.... no - NOT THE SWANS!
[n/a] un_oying @ 24.55.116.69 | 11-Oct-03/6:50 PM | Reply
gre8t
[6] nentwined @ 68.232.253.181 | 24-May-05/7:07 PM | Reply
Umm. Haiku in spirit, esque, but. Hmm.

No, but I like it. I'd appreciate it a lot more if you'd gotten it into 5-7-5.
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