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"I know what you need!" (Haiku) by A. Nomaly

Who said falling down wasnt fun? crashing thru lily pads and there's swans

nentwined 24-May-05/7:07 PM
Umm. Haiku in spirit, esque, but. Hmm.

No, but I like it. I'd appreciate it a lot more if you'd gotten it into 5-7-5.




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