Re: on passing through some small town by Dental Panic	4-Oct-05/7:00 PM
I like it, funny, 8.5
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	4-Oct-05/6:51 PM
I like the first 3 lines the best. I think you might like the poetry of St. John of the Cross. I noticed in your comments to people that you said you "shun the idea that God would rather speak to us through angels and preachers than simply directly through our own hearts." Yet you quote the Bible and speak of the Summa? What is wrong with God using things or people to speak to us. . .to our hearts even? Maybe that is the way He prefers to speak to our hearts at times and at other times He does it without any of this. Maybe He choses the how and not us. It would make sense afterall that He set it up however it is He does it if He is God.
Re: The Man with the Fiberglass Head by MacFrantic	29-Sep-05/8:03 PM
I like it
Re: Johnny by MacFrantic	29-Sep-05/7:40 PM
I would like to hear it read
Re: Life Before Birth by GregDeEgg	17-Sep-05/9:31 PM
:)
Re: Alive by emilyowey	13-Apr-05/8:26 PM
whoa! The first 2 lines don't really make sense to me, but I absolutely love the rest of the poem
Re: Listless Nights by blindwriter	4-Apr-05/9:29 PM
I love it. . .it's like I can see the picture you painted with the poem in my mind
Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver	4-Apr-05/9:20 PM
Well, if they were truely Catholic in their prayers, they most likely would have been praying for whatever God-willed. . .even if that meant their own deaths. (you know, like Jesus during His Passion when He asked more than once for His suffering to be taken away. . .unless it be the will of His Father)
Re: a comment on Prayer For The Church by sliver	3-Apr-05/1:20 PM
Dark. . . it has something to do with the well known saying "ask and you shall recieve"
Re: the victory by oneglove	23-Mar-05/7:00 PM
love the topic but I've seen your other poems and I bet you could make it flow a lot better
Re: a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove	23-Mar-05/6:52 PM
Dang! I like it is an understatement
Re: Tribulations of the ear and eye by oneglove	23-Mar-05/6:49 PM
That was fun to read!
Re: melancholy: by Sapphire	21-Mar-05/8:53 PM
nice
Re: will you? by Sapphire	21-Mar-05/8:51 PM
I like the last line, and a lot of the rest of it too. I think it could flow a lot better though.
Re: a comment on "America The Beautiful" by jroday	16-Mar-05/5:21 PM
somehow I am skeptical
Re: Social Awarness by midnitebeauty101	16-Mar-05/5:19 PM
is this a true story? 8
Re: This path by midnitebeauty101	16-Mar-05/5:18 PM
I don't sense much feeling in the poem, but I bet you have a lot more you could put into it?
Re: Broken by midnitebeauty101	16-Mar-05/5:16 PM
I really like the first 6 lines, and the last four lines except the very last one . . .I'll have to check out some of your other poems eh
Re: a comment on Religious Slaughter by Beyond_Dreams	13-Mar-05/1:16 PM
What would you die for?. . . This war in Iraq is nothing like the crusades.
Re: The Runaway by bamf909	28-Feb-05/11:29 PM
More, more, give us more. . .I like your poems