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Broken (Free verse) by midnitebeauty101
Glass shatters when it hits the wall
As do dreams when night starts to fall
But glass gets gathered and swept away
And dreams do die when we start the day
In fall colored leaves fill every tree
As tears do eyes until we can't see
But when winter comes those trees become bare
And tears will fall until nothings left there
The blue ocean as calm as can be
As we walk through life so peacefully
But when boats pass the waves become rough
And soon life's situations get tough
The sun rises so high in the sky
As do hopes when we think we can fly
But eventually the sun will go down
And when we jump, we hit the hard ground
Up in the sky birds fly and soar
As do hearts when they find love so pure
But without strong wings birds can't fly high
And hearts get crushed when we say goodbye
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 8005
Posted: March 15, 2005 12:10 PM PST; Last modified: March 15, 2005 12:10 PM PST
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