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Life Before Birth (Free verse) by GregDeEgg
Life before bith was without form or consequence; It's a pity I don't remember it more. The thoughts flew freely, without impulse or feeling, through tubes without friction or gravity- or tubes. It wasn't like sleeping- not existing or feeling, but it wasn't like nothing, not existing or feeling. It was like the wind- a movement without effort and it was like the light which is weightless and soft. It was, mostly, quiet like before not existing existed and before the first unthinking thought thunked.

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8654
Posted: February 25, 2004 8:38 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2004 8:38 PM PST
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[6] tadpole @ 68.64.172.229 | 17-Sep-05/9:31 PM | Reply
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