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Life Before Birth (Free verse) by GregDeEgg
Life before bith was without
form or consequence;
It's a pity I don't remember it more.
The thoughts flew freely,
without impulse or feeling,
through tubes without friction
or gravity-
or tubes.
It wasn't like sleeping-
not existing or feeling,
but it wasn't like nothing,
not existing or feeling.
It was like the wind-
a movement without effort
and it was like the light
which is weightless and soft.
It was, mostly, quiet
like before not existing
existed and before the
first unthinking thought
thunked.
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Posted: February 25, 2004 8:38 PM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2004 8:38 PM PST
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