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Life Before Birth (Free verse) by GregDeEgg

Life before bith was without form or consequence; It's a pity I don't remember it more. The thoughts flew freely, without impulse or feeling, through tubes without friction or gravity- or tubes. It wasn't like sleeping- not existing or feeling, but it wasn't like nothing, not existing or feeling. It was like the wind- a movement without effort and it was like the light which is weightless and soft. It was, mostly, quiet like before not existing existed and before the first unthinking thought thunked.

tadpole 17-Sep-05/9:31 PM
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