Re: a comment on Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Dec-03/3:07 PM
you like trying...
Re: a comment on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	3-Dec-03/2:10 PM
which was?
Re: Devilution by Jeremi B. Handrinos	3-Dec-03/2:07 PM
I don't mind a fraction of your poetry. Though is says very little for your personality.
Re: a comment on The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker	3-Dec-03/2:04 PM
well stop abusing them then, freak.
Re: my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	3-Dec-03/11:10 AM
It's ok. I don't know...I just don't like it.
Re: How Many Miles? by miraclemaker	3-Dec-03/11:08 AM
hmm, interesting.
Re: The War On Pedophilia by miraclemaker	3-Dec-03/11:06 AM
MJ IS INNOCENT!
Re: Pleas Dont.. by MysticalRaven88	3-Dec-03/11:03 AM
If you took out some of the excessive -so's- it would be so much better. ;-)
Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey	2-Dec-03/3:43 PM
SCHWEEEEEEEEEEEEET! I LOVE this poem. The flow, the vocab, the forward thrusting cadence. 10!
Re: Smiling by Jill Stockinger	2-Dec-03/3:05 PM
I'm not sure what's more interesting, the flow, structure, depth, simplicity, or the votes and comments. hehe. Good piece.
Re: 10-72 by dragonfly	18-Nov-03/10:13 AM
Slap my ass and call me sally, this poem rocks!
Re: Movie Stars And White Trash Weddings by scitz	14-Nov-03/11:35 AM
I love it. I agree with Tranny. Marshmallow loses the fine wine flavor that permeates throughout the rest of the poem. Good one.
Re: a comment on Paper Bag Scenario by dragonfly	7-Nov-03/3:35 PM
niiiiiiiiiiiiiice
Re: Marrowless highway by INTRANSIT	7-Nov-03/2:24 PM
she-car
Re: Paper Bag Scenario by dragonfly	7-Nov-03/2:16 PM
was it a wet paper bag?
Re: I don't like fish by INTRANSIT	7-Nov-03/2:11 PM
fish smells like fingers.
Re: a comment on untitled # 1 by noonewantstobealone	27-Oct-03/2:24 PM
was it inspired by ur ran over dog fido? lol...
Re: The Gone-Too-Far Kitchen by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	27-Oct-03/10:06 AM
You see, a backspace is eternally depressed, Submerged deep in the sanguine depths, Of illiterate logic, A child's voice is heard nonetheless. --nice, very nice. Actually Dave, your humor has, in the past, inspired me to not take things so seriously. Good stuff.
Re: a comment on The Gone-Too-Far Kitchen by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?	27-Oct-03/10:05 AM
It would be mysterious, coming from someone excreted from his mothers arse.
Re: untitled # 1 by noonewantstobealone	27-Oct-03/10:02 AM
hmmm, seems a bit dry. The laughing at funerals part has potential, but yeah...it's a bit dry. Like toast without butter.