on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik
30 Apr 2003, 1:38 PM
Really not my cup of tea, but I appreciate your poem as it stands.4
on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos
30 Apr 2003, 1:27 PM
Wale's are shit at rugby too. I liked the end,it made a nice change.4
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
26 Apr 2003, 12:46 PM
BEEN DONE ON TV.DULL
THIS TIME LAST YEAR,IT'S LIKELY YOU HADN'T HEARD OF GARETT S. BUT AFTER THIS ENGLISH STUDMUFFIN GOT HOT WITH THE WORLD IN A PHONE BOOTH,THE SCHUMACHERS TOOK NOTE
REMEMBERING STU SHEPARD.I PICKED UP THAT RINGING PAYPHONE,THE CALLER TOLD ME THAT HE'S GOT A GUN TRAINED ON MY HEAD I'LL DIE IF ,I HANG UP.
PLAYED OUT IN REAL TIME .I HUNG UP AND FOR ME LIKE THIS POEM ,YOU KNOW
REMEMBERING STU SHEPARD.I PICKED UP THAT RINGING PAYPHONE,THE CALLER TOLD ME THAT HE'S GOT A GUN TRAINED ON MY HEAD I'LL DIE IF ,I HANG UP.
PLAYED OUT IN REAL TIME .I HUNG UP AND FOR ME LIKE THIS POEM ,YOU KNOW
on sexy by elizabethann
13 Apr 2003, 2:46 AM
CHUBBY BUM CHEEKS ARE REAL SEXY
on Dick Turpin - Rogue, Highwayman, Misogynist... by Yardbird
13 Apr 2003, 2:25 AM
FISH OCTOPUS
VEGETABLE PANCAKE ROLL
LAMB BURGER IN A BUN
COLESLW AND TOSSED SALAD
VEGETABLE PANCAKE ROLL
LAMB BURGER IN A BUN
COLESLW AND TOSSED SALAD
on Daddy, Please? by elizabethann
13 Apr 2003, 2:04 AM
VERY GOOD,I LIKED IT 9
on sic homina ad papyrum by bondjedi
5 Apr 2003, 12:41 AM
GREAT 4 U,GREAT 4 ME,GREAT 4 PRIESTS.
on Independence? by TruthlessHero
5 Apr 2003, 12:31 AM
iS THIS ABOUT Star Wars as well
on Bible Quoting Fag Killer (So it is said) by Blindproject217
3 Apr 2003, 12:26 PM
I'm soooo bored of war.I know lets all go back to R.I.P poetry.
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on The Adulterous by Caducus
1 Apr 2003, 1:44 PM
Jesus loves a sinner?
on Guess Who? by Nagi
1 Apr 2003, 1:41 PM
lame,why did we bother
on A comment for Me (Aj) from a hottie by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
1 Apr 2003, 1:39 PM
DIE THEN AT LEAST THEN,THEN IT SHALL BE OVER YOU IMMATURE PASSION FLOOZY THAT YET HAS EVRYTHING TO LEARN OF LOVE.
HERE MY DARLIN IS A HINT
no true love is one way, nor a compition,ROMANTIC LOVE is built up over time.
It is also a posistive,there is no love in being dead.
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BORED NOW
HERE MY DARLIN IS A HINT
no true love is one way, nor a compition,ROMANTIC LOVE is built up over time.
It is also a posistive,there is no love in being dead.
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BORED NOW
on Lossing Grip by Katie2
1 Apr 2003, 1:19 PM
2 much suicidal crap in poetry, try something new.Still you inspired me 2 write make me smile.A good first go.Dont be so obvious with it.
replying on Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton
2 Mar 2003, 12:42 PM
BE KIND ENOUGH TO VOTE!
replying on Tribute to the greatest ever American poem by Garrett S Sexton
2 Mar 2003, 12:41 PM
IT'S JUST A TRIBUTE!
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
2 Mar 2003, 12:26 PM
I KNOW A GAY HUNTSMAN,
BUT THANX TO Tony B, HE'LL BE OUT OF A JOB SOON.
Is that ya dad?
I give 10
BUT THANX TO Tony B, HE'LL BE OUT OF A JOB SOON.
Is that ya dad?
I give 10