Re: a comment on Love has been awoke. (edited, needs new title) by TheVoiceless |
16-Sep-03/8:59 AM |
I didn't make you or break you, so why should I feel sorry for your poetry. I am guilty of nothing except giving you my honest opinion.
Stop beating yo-self up, concentrate on ya positive side.
P.S. IT'S HANDICAPPED, AND THE POEM IS STILL SHITE.
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Re: a comment on The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix |
16-Sep-03/8:47 AM |
Dave - you mysterious dick. This is a public forum where people vent their work for others to comment. Therefore if one would want to express themselves in peace they would not submit their work to poemranker (why, I pixie you)
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Re: Falling by Lifeboatman |
15-Sep-03/2:50 PM |
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Re: Love has been awoke. (edited, needs new title) by TheVoiceless |
15-Sep-03/2:46 PM |
Young stupid girl love poem. I hate em, all the same, shame. Give me some originality or some FUCKING pixies.{still you and other lonely girls like em so hey 3}
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Re: The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix |
15-Sep-03/2:39 PM |
BEST DAMN PIXIE POEM I EVER READ {ARE YOU A PIXIE?} 10
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Re: The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix |
15-Sep-03/2:39 PM |
BEST DAMN PIXIE POEM I EVER READ {ARE YOU A PIXIE?} 10
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Re: Babelfish Poetry (I): A pérola (Português) by Geschäftsreise |
15-Sep-03/2:35 PM |
I have been to Portugal many a time, Burgau is my favourite place to stay. {hope of a unique language}8
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Re: Alone by Artemis745 |
15-Sep-03/2:21 PM |
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Re: empty by timvick473662003 |
15-Sep-03/2:17 PM |
Pixie poems. I love em {no-one writes about pixies anymore} well done 10
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Re: Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus |
3-Sep-03/1:42 PM |
Hey, you leave coke alone. It's my friend and I don't like you and yours bad mouthing it. Just leave off the class A man. Conformists equal death.
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Re: Sugar Daddy (Free Curse) by Pystal Cocaine swifter than You. by Bachus |
3-Sep-03/1:42 PM |
Hey, you leave coke alone. It's my friend and I don't like you and yours bad mouthing it. Just leave off the class A man. Conformists equal death.
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Re: THE 7315 by Garrett S Sexton |
27-Aug-03/11:28 AM |
Reply to modest man
You the reader were able to do all three. Firstly, you did understand it (at least to a degree maybe). Secondly, you were able to research it as you
contacted me the author and have now acquired source info. Thirdly, you did dance with this poem as was my intention (while you tried to figure out what you already understood).
Ans: I intend everything which is hidden, as well as blatant, in my poetry and writings.
Ans: That is best left to the individual.
Ans: However much one thinks they have free thought, free thought has a limit, thus forcing us to belong. There are many examples of this throughout history (see world history).
Ans: If everyone attains true thought, unhinged and unadulterated, then there is no power. As for power one cannot be equal. Those that believe
themselves free thinking up to our time almost always stick themselves in boxes and belong to groups (see world history)
Ans: When one doesn't know how a trick works then it must seem like magic, like our forms of travel three thousand years ago. We don't give it a second thought, but to those then, like the true power of free thought it must have seemed unattainable and scary.
PS. All the names used are real activists of free thought in their own right. Only one is personally know to me. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Hope my
response has helped.
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Re: a comment on THE 7315 by Garrett S Sexton |
27-Aug-03/11:25 AM |
Reply to modest man
You the reader were able to do all three. Firstly, you did understand it (at least to a degree maybe). Secondly, you were able to research it as you contacted me the author and have now acquired source info. Thirdly, you did dance with this poem as was my intention (while you tried to figure out what you already understood).
Ans: I intend everything which is hidden, as well as blatant, in my poetry and writings.
Ans: That is best left to the individual.
Ans: However much one thinks they have free thought, free thought has a limit, thus forcing us to belong. There are many examples of this throughout history (see world history).
Ans: If everyone attains true thought, unhinged and unadulterated, then there is no power. As for power one cannot be equal. Those that believe themselves free thinking up to our time almost always stick themselves in boxes and belong to groups (see world history)
Ans: When one doesn't know how a trick works then it must seem like magic, like our forms of travel three thousand years ago. We don't give it a second thought, but to those then, like the true power of free thought it must have seemed unattainable and scary.
PS. All the names used are real activists of free thought in their own right. Only one is personally know to me. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Hope my response has helped.
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Re: A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
5-Aug-03/10:55 AM |
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Re: Phantom Space Adventure by SupremeDreamer |
5-Aug-03/10:52 AM |
RAGE, LOVE. FUCKING!!!! 10
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Re: He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz |
5-Aug-03/10:43 AM |
Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...
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Re: He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz |
5-Aug-03/10:43 AM |
Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...
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Re: Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer |
5-Jul-03/1:38 AM |
You wouldn't say that about George Bush - you pinko Americans and in the immortal words of Alf Bexton "ruin the planet, ruin it now before someone else does". PS Read the Bible, cause however you look at it whatever you do, Jesus loves a sinner, the world loves a winner and Jesus saves all.
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Re: My Night on July 4th by ~incarnate~ |
5-Jul-03/1:12 AM |
Yes, could have done with a rocket.
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Re: Sunday night movies after bible study by Bachus |
30-Apr-03/2:18 PM |
fuckin funny HA HA HA HA HA....6
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