Re: a comment on My Prayer by amanda_dcosta |
29-Mar-06/11:43 AM |
I GET MY JOLLY FROM THAT LOLLY.
PINK, FLESHY LIFE GIVER.
WOMEN OR MEN?
BOW DOWN.
SUCCUMB!
OUR PASSAGE THROUGH.
WITHOUT IT.
IS BUT NUMB!
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Re: Kristi's Quiescence by matt door |
29-Mar-06/11:12 AM |
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Re: Rose by firestar_2580 |
28-Mar-06/9:58 AM |
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Re: a comment on A look inside [someone real} by Garrett S Sexton |
28-Mar-06/9:51 AM |
Revised for you. Happy. Wanker.
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Re: a comment on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0 |
28-Mar-06/9:39 AM |
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Re: a comment on Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0 |
27-Mar-06/7:53 AM |
If you cannot take criticism don't put it out there man!I find it laughable you worked hard on this small piece,are you 9?
I have no opinion of you I do not know you I just judged your work honestly.Sorry we don't agree,thats life!After all who am I to say?You won lots of contests with this work.
AGAIN WITH THE GOD BIT TRYING TO SCARE ME NOW, HOW AMERICAN!
I AM FAR TO MATURE OF MIND TO GIVE THIS ANY CREDENCE.
THEWORK IS LAME,NO RUDENESS INTENDED.
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Re: a comment on A look inside [someone real} by Garrett S Sexton |
27-Mar-06/7:38 AM |
You didn't read past the end,it's not my poem you twott!
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Re: Time Will Change by x0lovelylarnx0 |
25-Mar-06/2:09 AM |
Words all jumbled up on paper,how clever?
OH and the use of God, how apt!
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Re: Parody Of Sadness by Miggy |
9-Oct-03/2:01 PM |
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Re: B.F. by skaskowski |
9-Oct-03/1:58 PM |
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Re: Bar Tale 2.0 by jessicazee |
5-Oct-03/11:39 AM |
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Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america |
26-Sep-03/8:25 AM |
wHAT A BUNCH OF FUCKWITS!
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Re: Sexually mine! by LuckyJoe |
26-Sep-03/8:15 AM |
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Re: The curtain- broken. by babe |
23-Sep-03/10:21 AM |
Another virgin lost to sex, wonderful poem..TURN ME ON SOME MORE..YUM..YUM 10
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Re: THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
23-Sep-03/10:06 AM |
Blackmailing the ranker? Not quite a chain letter, but witty. An average 5 from me.
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Re: Difficult Decisions by EAger to Offend |
20-Sep-03/1:39 AM |
AH,THE MUGGLES OF MAN. THIS TOUCHED ME, AN EASY TEN.
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Re: MicroPoem by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
20-Sep-03/1:08 AM |
LAZY, CRASS NAZI PROPAGANDA.
Not what I expected, but a good shock-thinker of a poem. 9
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Re: Can you comment and vote? by LuckyJoe |
16-Sep-03/1:49 PM |
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
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Re: Can you comment and vote? by LuckyJoe |
16-Sep-03/1:49 PM |
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
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Re: Can you comment and vote? by LuckyJoe |
16-Sep-03/1:49 PM |
A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1
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