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Difficult Decisions (Free verse) by EAger to Offend
I am a vessel of desire So greedy as to want EVERYTHING. And, alas, how vain to strive for it. With desires in conflict I surely appear a flake, A creature whose habit is purely random. I wish to be restrained But, also to indulge. I insult fate In pursuit of immortality. Inevitably, the conflicts between my desires Cause me conflicts in relationships Where the objectionable acts of the other Reveal the only healthy resolution.

Down the ladder: Thinking for you

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4669
Posted: September 20, 2003 1:26 AM PDT; Last modified: September 20, 2003 1:26 AM PDT
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[10] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.76.112 | 20-Sep-03/1:39 AM | Reply
AH,THE MUGGLES OF MAN. THIS TOUCHED ME, AN EASY TEN.
[8] Y2kSlamPoet @ 204.31.160.96 | 20-Sep-03/2:04 AM | Reply
immortality has little to do with your physical body.

blessed with 8
[n/a] EAger to Offend @ 65.95.241.126 > Y2kSlamPoet | 20-Sep-03/12:25 PM | Reply
this poem has little to do with the physical body
[8] deleted user @ 64.63.204.8 | 20-Sep-03/11:36 AM | Reply
I wish to be restrained but also to indulge.

Oh, the Humanity.
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