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Thinking for you (Free verse) by J.B. Manning
Every time I try to rhyme I spit forth This bile and slim And lock the doors Inside my mind The keys to which I cannot find And madness asks me Where the hell I’ve been

Up the ladder: Difficult Decisions
Down the ladder: The Devil & Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6
Weighted score: 5.190725
Overall Rank: 4670
Posted: September 24, 2003 3:25 PM PDT; Last modified: September 24, 2003 3:25 PM PDT
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[8] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 | 29-Jun-04/12:04 AM | Reply
Actually, not bad, it's a shame your ass aint rad.
Like mine, in lime, for niggers thirsting -- a lemon fizzy blast of white crack and pink ass.
[7] Skamper @ 202.6.132.194 | 23-Mar-07/9:52 PM | Reply
Just Out! Standard answer...

did you forget the 'e' in slime?

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