Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Tribute to the greatest ever American poem (Ode) by Garrett S Sexton
Little Big Man,and indian chief. Gonna go hunting,cactha wild beast. Little Big Man,and indian chief. Catch the wild Bison,for the feast. little Big Man,and indian chief. Out in a lake,fishing up stream. Catching the biggest Salmon that there ever be. Little Big Man,and indian chief Little Big Man,and indian chief. IN A TIME OF WAR,WHEN THERE CAN'T BE NO PEACE. In a time of war,when there can't be no peace. Little Big Man,and indian chief. Little Big Man,and indian chief. Fight many battles,see many victories. Riding side by side,it's plegded till they die. Little Big Man,and indian chief. [slow] Little Big Man,and indian chief. In a hail of bullets there deaths did they meet Brave to the bone,and smiling to the sleep Little Big Man,and indian chief. Little Big Man and indian chief. Whispers in the wind, just like their beliefs. Hardly heard when they lived,and ignored after they died. Little Big Man,and indian chief

Up the ladder: I love the way
Down the ladder: Blob??****(blob)&&

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 12
.. 00
.. 20

Arithmetic Mean: 1.2
Weighted score: 4.547029
Overall Rank: 12700
Posted: March 1, 2003 2:36 PM PST; Last modified: March 2, 2003 11:53 AM PST
View voting details
Comments:
[7] Mr Pig @ 195.92.194.12 | 1-Mar-03/3:33 PM | Reply
Good Show.
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Mar-03/7:28 PM | Reply
"Brave to the bone,and smiling to the sleep" choice and smart.

"just like there beliefs" their would be better or not. nice poem pickle teeth.
[n/a] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.85.115 > horus8 | 2-Mar-03/12:00 PM | Reply
I work quickly, thus sometimes error in the grammar. Cut me some slack! The pay is in the moment, pure flow with me.
[n/a] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 2-Mar-03/12:26 PM | Reply
I think your last stanza did the splits.
[n/a] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.85.115 > Jeremi B. Handrinos | 2-Mar-03/12:41 PM | Reply
IT'S JUST A TRIBUTE!
[n/a] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.85.115 > Garrett S Sexton | 2-Mar-03/12:42 PM | Reply
BE KIND ENOUGH TO VOTE!
[2] bondjedi @ 216.163.73.66 | 5-Apr-03/4:19 PM | Reply
you have captured the essence of America...NOT!
222 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001