poemranker ::MIX FEELINGS by ctwilliams

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Free verse № 88526

MIX FEELINGS

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Feb 2004 · Edited 12 Feb 2004 · 1 comment

MIX FEELINGS ONE MINUTE I LOVE YOU THE NEXT I DON'T I WOULD LIKE TO TELL YOU I LOVE YOU AND WANT TO BE WITH YOU BUT I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU WILL ACT. THIS IS MY FIRST TIME IN A LONG TIME HAVING THESE FEELINGS THE LAST TIME I WAS HURT AND TORN APART I WILL NOT LET THAT HAPPEN AGAIN. WHEN I TALK TO YOU MY WORLD LIGHTS UP I THINK YOU FEEL THE SAME WAY BUT I GET THIS FEELING YOU DON'T. I LOVE YOU BUT IT IS THESE MIX FEELINGS I HAVE. I FEEL LIKE A BABY WHEN I SEE OR TALK TO YOU I THINK OF YOU AND ONLY YOU. I CRY MYSELF TO SLEEP LOST IN MY MIX FEELINGS. THESE FEELINGS HAVE TAKEN OVER MY LIFE. IT SEEMS WHEN I HEAR YOUR NAME EVERYTHING STOPS. I'M SCARED CAUSE OF THESE MIX FEELINGS I NEED YOU AND LOVE YOU BUT I DON'T KNOW. I'M LOST IN THE WATER OF LOVE IF SOME OF THESE FEELINGS ARE RIGHT YOU ARE GOING TO JUMP IN AND SAVE ME. THESE MIX FEELINGS ARE KILLING ME ONE MINUTE I LOVE YOU THE NEXT I DON'T. HELP ME I'M LOST!

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[0] zodiac 13-Feb-04/9:53 AM Reply
I don't understand what is meant by your instructions. By mixing FEELINGS I only get EEFLINGS or SNIGFLEE, neither of which inspires anything in me. And (this just in passing) are you fucking daft?!