poemranker ::Dustin by Fire_is_cool

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Free verse № 131182

Dustin

Member since 2004 · Posted 17 Sep 2005 · 3 comments

I close my eyes, An you appear, You pull me close, I see your face, You seem so unsure, Bout your life, I love you so much, When I'm with you, My life is bright, Everything we do, Feels so right, An I'll never, Let you go.

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[4] D. $ Fontera 17-Sep-05/8:28 PM Reply
I didn't know you felt that way about me, but thanks. Hah!
[1] leonxic 18-Sep-05/12:26 PM Reply
Is this a joke? If it is, than it's pretty damn funny; if it's not... it's still pretty damn funny.
[0] Edna Sweetlove 13-Aug-06/5:53 PM Reply
Illiterate garbage. Why not get educated?