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Dustin (Free verse) by Fire_is_cool
I close my eyes, An you appear, You pull me close, I see your face, You seem so unsure, Bout your life, I love you so much, When I'm with you, My life is bright, Everything we do, Feels so right, An I'll never, Let you go.

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.2
Weighted score: 4.547029
Overall Rank: 12708
Posted: September 17, 2005 8:12 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2005 8:12 PM PDT
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[4] D. $ Fontera @ 207.200.116.65 | 17-Sep-05/8:28 PM | Reply
I didn't know you felt that way about me, but thanks. Hah!
[1] leonxic @ 85.37.190.67 | 18-Sep-05/12:26 PM | Reply
Is this a joke? If it is, than it's pretty damn funny; if it's not... it's still pretty damn funny.
[0] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.178.70.5 | 13-Aug-06/5:53 PM | Reply
Illiterate garbage. Why not get educated?
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